May 2012 Prompts
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Compassion
Posted by Maggie on Saturday, January 2, 2010 | Leave a Reply
Caring for another
Often a mother
Many share much
Pleasing with touch
Actions relieve pain
Some refuse gain
Serving from heart
Illness does depart
Offers much care
Never grumbles there
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Beautiful acrostic, very clean, except the last line .. I think "there" is a little forced"
Thanks...when I said "there" ... I was speaking of from there meaning the "heart" :)
Very nice. I like the rhyme. Shows a poet can do much with few words.
Thank you, I do like to rhyme and there are times when little can say much.
Thank you so much for reading me and leaving a comment.
Very good take, Maggie.
Nice one!
very comforting words Maggie!
nice!