May 2012 Prompts
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Reincarnation
Posted by Maggie on Saturday, November 14, 2009 | Leave a Reply
Remains change
Even re-arrange
In time
New mind
Changing again
Always been
Reflecting trust
New dust
Arrivals come
To one
Imitating birth
On earth
Now changed
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For One Single Expression & Acrostic Only Prompt #7
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Beautiful acro message...:)
'to imitate birth, reincarnate'
nice take on the prompt!
You've got the cycles perfect there.
Amity Me,
I do believe in a different birth
Tony,
There are many cycles to meet, greet and repeat.
Life, evolution, and rebirth are all about change. Learning in the process is key. Nicely done.
I was particularly drawn to the first line, I think because they could be reversible, (though not in acrostic form - but then there you have it - a glimpse into the inner workings of my mind!) "Remains change - change remains" How profound a beginning you have there! Nice!
So lovely! This was wonderful.
This feels very playful - I think it worked well within the form.
That is neat, Maggie. You do gr8 with your acrostics.
I'm with you, I don't believe at all that this is the birth process. One did come from dust.
.. :-)
Very good Maggie. You write some wonderful acrostics.
Those arrivals are miracles. This was great, Maggie.
Very nice take via an acrostic!
Damn good :) keep going.
perfect thoughts :)
A lovely acrostic with a perfect loop.
Perfection! :)
Well Written!
Wonderful take!
time and time again
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Remains change. I love the ambiguity/tension that informs the poem. Remains do change with inspiration, intention, reflection. Yet a fragrant essence remains.
that was truly a delight to read and contemplate...!!
excellent interpretation~